I have never done a power point/slideshare presentation before, so as I searched for one to critique I took a minute to think of what I wanted to search for. I realized that everything I had been looking at on the internet lately had been really negative stuff that was either causing me to become emotional, or upset in some ways, such as videos of children who were cyberbullied and ended their lives, or ignorant videos of people being racist. So in the moment, I searched “rainbows and sunshine” because that was the most beautiful thing I could think of lol. I came across a few so-so slideshares and then I searched “beautiful life”. I then came across this slideshare that I decided to critique called “We are the world”. At that moment I realized that even while trying to search for something silly I came across an important issue that needs to be realized.

The “We are the world” slideshare is filled with beautiful photographs of children and each photograph has a line or two from the song that was written by USA for Africa and performed by many popular singers such as Lionel Ritchie and Bruce Springsteen. To critique the slideshare itself, I thought it was fabulously done but the only thing that I found a little off is that the writing is very small and even if it was put in “bold” it might look a little better. Other than that, I think it was done very well with the different photographs. One of the nicest things is that the children are all smiling. It’s beautiful that through everything they still smile… I think they could teach us a few things!